Life’s too short to figure out books like Lerner’s. It’s not hard to read. It’s not actually anything except an attempt by a man to show us he understands the word proprioception. A single usage in a novel would be remarkable. Lerner uses it on average every 50 pages. Literally.
There are bits which Bret Easton Ellis could do perfectly which Lerner tries to imitate and fails badly at.
None of it is original. None of it is unique. None of it is worth reading except this midly amusing quote that Lerner probably overheard on the subway:
“Shaving is a way to start your workday by ritually not cutting your throat while you have the chance.”
Books like 10:04 make you realise that you still have that opportunity open to you.